That is a very good apple maby give the apple a bit more curves
I like the apple the text isn't that bad but can you add a full stop at the end of your story
I like your apple but it needs more dots. I still think it cool.
This is a very good apple you have put a lot of effort into this. maybe you can improve by adding more dots
That is a very good apple maby give the apple a bit more curves
ReplyDeleteI like the apple the text isn't that bad but can you add a full stop at the end of your story
ReplyDeleteI like your apple but it needs more dots. I still think it cool.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good apple you have put a lot of effort into this. maybe you can improve by adding more dots
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